MY WISH

This poem is just about my wish! please read and correct my mistakes.... :)

I wish I had a puppy,
who plays with me,
crys with me,
laughs with me,
eats with me,
sleeps with me,
learns with me,
bath with me,
walk with me,
relax with me,
shout with me,
But I don't have a puppy,
who does all these with me!
When I become free,
I play alone!
When I become sad,
I cry alone!
When I become happy,
I laugh alone!
When I become hungry,
I eat alone!
When I become sleepy,
I sleep alone!
When I forget something,
I learn alone!
When I become dirty,
I bathe alone!
When I want to go somewhere,
I walk alone!
When I become tired,
I relax alone!
When I become angry,
I shout alone!
Now, I am weeping
as i don't have a puppy!
My parents say,
"There is no need of a puppy
You itself is a puppy for us!"
When I shout at them,
They again say,
"We don't have room
for a puppy!"
I am weeping,
as i don't have a puppy!
Please God,
I too want a puppy,
Give me a puppy!

Author's Note

This is just a small child's wish. please do read it but no laughing! please correct my mistakes!

Reviews

[Meshalini]

You have already showed me this poem and reading it again makes me laugh again.

Sorry for that. This is a very very very good poem and it remaids me about my sister when she asked a puppy to my mom and my mom kept saying no but she finally got it. It with us 7 years but this year January, our dog passed away and my sister cried a lot and didn't eat for 2 days. It's a painful memory.

Anyway, hope your wish come true.

[Ardra Nair]

akka, r u talking about suzhi? anyway, thank you so much akka... i too hope the same!!!!

[Meshalini]

Yes, its about Suzie......

[Ardra Nair]

oh! it died on 2016 January?

[Meshalini]

yes..on January 8, 2016....just 2 days before her birthday..

[Ardra Nair]

oh so poor!