Dreams

Hope you will enjoy!

I was a doctor,
who treats the patients for free!
I was an engineer,
who constructs houses for the poor!
I was a teacher,
who teaches the children well!
I was a scientist,
who invents useful things!
I was a cop,
who does her work actively!
I was a pilot,
who drives carefully!

But the were just my dreams
when i was younger!
Now, I am a beggar,
who begs for food and money!

It's easy to dream,
But it's hard to achieve!
But nothing is impossible,
if you work hard!

Reviews

[M P Ramesh]

ARDRA,

I ts dreams which makes the result. Imagine the stage where one has no ability to dream. THEN NO SUCH WONDER AS ABOVE COULD HAVE BEEN POSSIBLE to be achieved. The creativity point of view should only to worship this and produce it as it comes. The poetry is called as the child of dreams with reason unknown inside.
good attempt...........


carry on..............

[Ardra Nair]

ya that's right! but if u just dream and sit, nothing can be achieved! it can be achieved only through hard work.... anyway, thank you so much sir... :) thank you for reviewing....

[Bala Gorthi]

A very well written message through a poem. You have rightly presented that dreams without hard work are
never going to come true.
You have a story telling art.keep it up. I see a future poet and writer coming up in you.
A very nice word craft and thought craft. Well done.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing, Ardra.:-):-):-)

[Ardra Nair]

thank you,sir! thank you! ^_^

[Meshalini]

Wow..this is nice..I love it and you said it right dear,if we work hard than nothing is impossible....Well done dear.

[Ardra Nair]

thank u so much akka :)

[Einstein Noodle]

what impresses me most in this poem is the ongoing process of living ... i also appreciate that the "cop" is a woman ... way to be ;) in my life hard honest work does pay off ..not necessarily they way we want it to go ..but the higher we shoot ..the farther we go .. :) great stuff my friend!
E.

[Ardra Nair]

Thank u very much E!!!

[mou]

Yes, nothing is impossible if we try at our best level..
And a dream can become a flash of our future if we give our best to achieve it..
Very beautiful, dear Ardra..
Keep up great writing!!

[Ardra Nair]

Thank u mou didi... i will try my best ^_^