Fantastic!

It is very wonderful when it begins,

It is very joyful when it grows a little,

It is very lovely when it is a kid,

It is very playful when it is young,

It is very splendid when it crashes into youth,

It is very beautiful when it reaches a height,

It is very grateful when it is enjoying its middle,

It is very dutiful when it grows older,

It is very weak but still happy when it comes near death,

It is very scary when it meets death,

Yes, Life is fantastic!

We create problems in our life which leads to sadness,

Else, we would worry only of death!

Author's Note

This is my first writing online. Your reviews can make a lot of changes in me, friends.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

the use of repetition works ..i am very impressed with your English and maturity for someone from India and only 11 years old ... i think if you are 11 ..you have an old spirit :) nice work ... i agree ..life is fantastic and it rolls in stages ;)
E.

[Ardra Nair]

thank u.. and i am 11...

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................. nice to meet you ... i am 68

[Ardra Nair]

oh! so i think u have expirence!!!????

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha perhaps a little :)

[Ardra Nair]

u r a great person,E....

[mou]

So true,,
I am surprised to see this .At this age , you explain the truth of every stages of life, so well.You have a great talent.Keep it up :)

[Ardra Nair]

Thank you, didi. It means a lot to me...

[mou]

You are welcome :)

[Ardra Nair]

:) :) :) :)

[A Humble Poet]

Welcome! Welcome! That was a great poem, I really like how you worded it :) Keep up the great work!

[Ardra Nair]

thank you, Didi.

[Zahra]

Welcome to writerscafe! A nice poem and very good message.

[Ardra Nair]

thanks,Didi

[Zahra]

my pleasure! :)

[Ardra Nair]

okay.... :)