Frozen Memories

A gentle breeze,

A wave of transcendence illuminating the still darkness

This was the setting of her victorious magnificence

Her eyes were ablaze with purity as she sang so vibrantly

A wondrous spectacle to behold,

Her hair fluttered and danced on the winter wind,

Creating harmonies of compassion unrivaled,

So that not even the waning moon could mask her splendor

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Such beautiful lines.I m truly impressed by your talent .A most excellent piece:P

[Arcus]

Thank you for your kind words. Perhaps I am too negatively self-critical, but it could be better. Hahaha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ah another perfectionist i lay no claim to that particular trait but i know when my poems are right and when they need work so there is that:)

[Arcus]

I feel the same. Hahaha. I simply feel that there will always be a better way of conveying the piece, no matter how final I feel about the finished work. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha i understand!!!!!!

[NA]

so very beautiful, enjoyed :) x

[Arcus]

Thank you so very much. :)

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

this was god damn beautiful, I love every line. please keep on writing :)

[Arcus]

Thank you very much. I plan on continuing to write until I die. :)

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

Poets till the end, man. Poets till the end.

[Arcus]

Hahaha indeed. Verily, I tip my hat to you, sir. :)

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

thanks for the tipping of the hat lol :p

[Arcus]

You are most welcome, sir. I just wish I owned a hat. Hahaha

[Mick November]

This reminds me of my youth when the idea of love was new and the pain of rejection. Your imagery is striking in its clarity. I don't know how old you are but I do hope you continue writing at all costs.

[Arcus]

Thank you, friend. I am 21 years old. I plan on writing until the earth takes me.

[chaotic katie]

Lovely imagery In this piece, I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Arcus]

Thank you. :)

[chaotic katie]

Anytime! besides listening to music, writing and reading poetry are usually what I do. i'm a bit of a wallflower.

[Eloquent Sin]

Beautiful... :') This could rival the contents of Snape's diary... You remember that episode of Potter Puppet Pals, yes? Haha I'm kidding, just had to mess with you. :)

[Arcus]

Bahahaha!!! XD Oh, you!! XD This is why you're an awesome sister!!

[Eloquent Sin]

Indeed i am ;)

[Eloquent Sin]

Do you remember this? "Your love is like piercing knives, so darling, stab me to death" :p

[Arcus]

Yes, but that is a lyric. :P

[Eloquent Sin]

Indeed it is, i just found two of your songs on my computer xD

[Arcus]

Oh, nice. Hahaha