For A Dead Girl

Who are you that intrigues me so?

I do not know your name,

Yet I feel as if we're the best of friends

You're so beautiful

 

How I want to speak to you,

To learn more about you

And to be close to you

You're so beautiful

 

We could possibly fall in love

And hold each other close,

Bringing our spirits together as one

You're so beautiful

 

Darling, how you torment me

Your young pale skin taunts me

I wish that I could be yours

You're so beautiful

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is sad.That is why we should tell people how we feel because if something happens tomorrow at least they would know how we feel .Knowing is always going to be better than wondering and conjuring up scenarios in your mind.I am sorry about your girl.Your poem says it all:)

[Arcus]

I think about her quite often.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am sorry:(

[Arcus]

Oh, it's fine. Don't apologize. :) There is no need.

[Vidya Bacchus]

As you say my friend:)

[Arcus]

I do. :P Hahahaha

[Red & Blue]

I feel compelled to tell you, TO TELL HER ALREADY!
This was a great write, I loved it compeletly! Well done

[Arcus]

I can't tell her, because she is dead. She never even knew that I existed, but I admired her for so very long. I wrote this right after her funeral. I still visit her, when the seasons shift.

Thank you for your kind words.

[Mick November]

You have a talent for bringing out feelings in your readers. I can relate to your words on a personal level. I'm glad you posted this.

[Arcus]

Thank you very much for your kind words. :)

[Holly Mason]

like the emotion that came when reading this...
I just wanna fuss at ya- Tell her already...and that means you have compelled
me the reader to feel in your words...that is a gift
thank you for sharing*)

[Arcus]

Thank you. :)

[revalatia]

a romance of the senses.. delightful :)

[Arcus]

Thank you.