Brightest EyesA Story by ArchiaWhen I was younger, a group of us would walk home from
school. It was only a few blocks, down some streets. But on the way there was
one house, with an old man and an apple tree. We’d always stop and he’d let us
pick an apple. The sweetest, juiciest apple ever bitten. He was a nice old man.
But then high school came, and I took a different route home. A year later I
mussed the apple. So changed my way to walk by his house. Looking back now, I
find at this age I would never have accepted an apple from him, Guilt is always
expected before innocence. But I was young then, innocent myself. Three times a
week I would pass his house, and he would always mile, nod at the tree.
Sometimes comment on the weather. Two years later, when I cut down to twice a
week, he began pointing out the best ones. He’d reach up and picked the
brightest one, he’d call it, just like my eyes. We’d make a few minutes of
conversation now. Another two years and he could no longer reach the brightest apples. It’s the back, he’d say, like it wasn’t
really a part of him. He'd point, that’s the one. And it always would be the sweetest
and juiciest. I’d sit with him now, wand we’d talk. About anything really, this
and that. I could sit there for an hour before I realised the time. I asked him
once if children still passed on their way home. Kids are too cautious these
days he sighed. And now, after all that, I stand here, after coming for a
week and finding no one. There’s a movers truck out front, man with red eyes
shifting everyone around. Maybe he feels my gaze because he turns, and looks at
me. “You want an apple?” He nods towards the tree. It’s like
a mimic almost, but too much effort to be right. Awkward really. I look at the tree, the dull apples sitting there. “No
thanks.” It wouldn’t be bright if he didn’t pick it. “Was it his back?” I
asked, the question seeming dumb upon my lips. He seemed confused. “There never was anything wrong with
his back.” “Oh.” He had moved to stand before me, within reach. “It was
his heart, just gave out finally.” He sniffed, I could tell he was sad. “Too
much staring at pretty girls he always said. Never really made sense though,
ain’t been able to stare at anything much for the past years.” “Oh.” I said no more, and he slowly moved away. I went
towards the apple tree, the fruit still seeming dull. I closed my eyes, reached
up, picked an apple. It was the sweetest, juiciest apple. He was in that apple,
smiling upon me finding his secret. It’s something you feel, he had once said.
Eyes closed I could find the brightest apple. Except he hadn’t needed to close
his eyes. © 2012 Archia |
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2 Reviews Added on March 25, 2012 Last Updated on September 10, 2012 AuthorArchiaAboutReally, I'm just one of you. Come in, sit down, grab a cup of tea and enjoy a good read (now that may be a questionable statement). If there's anything in any of my stories that you want to be exp.. more..Writing
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