Gobstopper WorldA Story by ArchiaThe world is rather much like a gobstopperThe world. That round thing that looks
like a blue and green gobstopper from outer-space. It must though be a
half-sucked gobstopper, because the first layer is always one colour and then
as you go further down, there’s patches and mergings and really by the end
you’re left with this small white dob of a gobstopper. But no one ever looks;
who would want to take a small saliva-covered thing from their mouth and stop
to look at it? But let’s get back to the beginning.
We’ve gotten part the first layer, the one colour, and we’re beginning to see
patches of blue and green. Our world. But I want to change this world. Blue and
green never really has been a fancy of mine, they’re too neutral. So the only
thing to do is keep sucking that gobstopper til we get down to a pink. There we
go, this nice bright pink. It’s a bit iffy though, there’s a yellow underneath
it and at some points they’ve merged to create this sickly colour. If I’m
changing to world, I’m not having anything sick. So we get down a bit further
and there’s a brown. But the brown is a bit faded, a poorly coloured brown, and
I don’t want to see anything poor. Let’s keep going. It’s becoming quite a
small gobstopper now, but we’ll get there, we’ll get to the right colour. Red’s
come now. It’s quite a deep red, but it’s bit of a bloody type of colour, and I
don’t want anything to do with the bloody. It’s getting a bit thin now our
gobstopper. A bit too thin actually. There’s nothing left but to hold the small
saliva-covered thing and stop and look and it. It’s a white dob. A white, even,
equal, dob. Our gobstopper world has been sucked
through the colours, and all that’s left is this whiteness. A bit like the
first colour, one that was the same over the whole thing. That’s what our gobstopper world is, one
that begins the same and ends the same; equal. And the middle, well that’s just
to pass the time whilst we wait for the bus. © 2013 ArchiaReviews
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2 Reviews Added on October 20, 2013 Last Updated on October 20, 2013 AuthorArchiaAboutReally, I'm just one of you. Come in, sit down, grab a cup of tea and enjoy a good read (now that may be a questionable statement). If there's anything in any of my stories that you want to be exp.. more..Writing
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