History's Time

Will we ever meet history?

A world of the past

A lesson for the future

What of the present?

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Accordin' to me, the present i think is the portion between world of past and a lesson for future....lol
well, that's again an amazin' thought, even i got your this poem from a dome of your chapters...lol, i was expectin' that you'll write one poem, but you didn't so, i got this one n here i found the deepness's of depth...well, i'm not gettin' time much to read your chapters, i think this month i'm gonna b busy.
By the way, your words're nice here as i read after a long days after probin' form chapter's crowdness...llol
nice flow of ink, i am gonna think about your this question or on this deep thought in deep.
well written, you got me again.

[spiritwind]

very good question
are we too busy living to see the patterns of the past are present in our present?
is it only when we are old and weary unto death that we see the lessons that the past taught had we just been present?

[sithlordjp]

Excellent! :) Smart and powerful with only a few well chosen words, well done!

[Martin Ramirez]

Short, yet deep, and clever.

[Marie]

A nice tanka...well thought out thoughts...