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A whole in my heart from the love I gave away.

A whole in my heart from the love I never gave.

Although he wasnt perfect, his love was always true.

For he was the first love that I ever knew.

My tears drop to the page.

My heart breaks.

It hurts to know that the man who loved you,you gave away.

 Simply left him on the Goodwill stage.

Slightly used and broken with small holes and stains.

If i were able to buy him back,

Would he stay?

Would I stay?

Reviews

[Colby]

Good writing...

"Simply left him on the Goodwill stage.
Slightly used and broken with small holes and stains.
If i were able to buy him back..."


Excellent metephor.
Great way to describe your emotions.

[Kristina Moulaison]

This is good. Well said, simply stated but you describe the feelings well, good questions. I like that it's blue, very appropriate. : )