A Union of Trails

A Union of Trails

A Poem by Archishman Rick

In the stretches between a distant crest and a jungle creek,
A remote site hosting no apparent souls to greet,
Set the stage one day for two lone strangers off to seek,
Differing knowledge and adventure to unknowingly meet.

One out to discover what scapes lay beyond the fresh hills,
The other to cross the waters that made the forest split.
Fervent travellers as they were, both sensed each other's thrills;
Their opposing routes connected by a kindred spirit.

Mutual regard born not from whim but esoteric intrigue,
Past personal background into the rich backdrop each faced,
Despite their slipshod gear and solo strides in midday fatigue,
They could clearly acknowledge each other's romantic taste.

Fervour refueled and faith revamped by a union of chance,
Easing concerns for what lay ahead and what was left behind,
One's untrodden path secured by the other's trail in advance,
For the dauntless will toward a gallivanter's wealth to find.

© 2023 Archishman Rick


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This was wonderful and stretched far and wide. Lots of things to contemplate in it.
I feel the author is offering the different routes we take in life, the different aspects or modes of living; some intersect, others don't. Lots of humans can have shared purposes, outlooks, ways of thinking.
Very nice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

Such an amazing perception of thus write. I must agree with and appreciate your remarkable words, Sa.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow!
Cheers
You are welcome 😊



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Wow! An eloquent write so gracefully inked. I guess in life we all have very different paths to follow though we all reach the same place at the end of our path. We set out on our path with faith and hope in our hearts and meet kindred spirits along the way which we are able to identify with. We may have many or few things in common with our kindred spirits, but there will always be a specific reason as to why they have crossed our path in life. They complement each other as so finely expressed on the poem "One's untrodden path secured by the other's trail in advance". The poem has beautiful spiritual undertones for me. I like this poem v-e-r-y much, Rick. It speaks to me in many different ways. Superb penning! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Archishman Rick

4 Months Ago

I am elated to read such an encouraging and earnest review from you, Marie. I am honoured that you a.. read more
Marie

4 Months Ago

Most welcome always, dear Rick and thank you again for sharing. Every possible good wish to you also.. read more
This was wonderful and stretched far and wide. Lots of things to contemplate in it.
I feel the author is offering the different routes we take in life, the different aspects or modes of living; some intersect, others don't. Lots of humans can have shared purposes, outlooks, ways of thinking.
Very nice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

Such an amazing perception of thus write. I must agree with and appreciate your remarkable words, Sa.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow!
Cheers
You are welcome 😊
A tale of chance encounters, shared ambitions, and the power of companionship in the pursuit of adventure and personal growth...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

Dear Bhuyanshi,
Your review is spot on and savouringly compact. Thank you sincerely for leavi.. read more

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Added on August 21, 2023
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Archishman Rick
Archishman Rick

West Bengal, India



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A fellow in my mid twenty's, I have a knack to challenge myself mentally and physically. Whether it strengthens or softens my general naivety, I do not know. I hope to find, and trust the worth in t.. more..

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