Spirit Woken

Spirit Woken

A Poem by Archishman Rick

I beheld a dream last night,
There blew a relentless storm,
The view was blurred in my sight,
The smell was out of the norm.
With an adventurous glide,
I tried to see clearly,
The mystery that wants to hide,
In the stupor queerly.
With a pressing deja vu,
I pushed back to understand,
My senses dug deep into,
The heart of this unknown land.
Tense instinct soon let me know,
In these depths lurks a great foe,
I grabbed onto my last chance,
To get into fighting stance.
My venture then met its end,
As if there I never went,
Though the dream faded away,
My spirit woken remained.

© 2022 Archishman Rick


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This dream of yours had me balancing on the precipice of hell. What a scary place to find yourself. You realized the danger and pulled back. You recognized the foe and you woke up at the right moment. Felt the tension here. Enjoes the read.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

That had been quite the dream indeed, whew! Thank you so much for your empathetic review. But who kn.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

You have to show the foe that light wins over dark and love over hate. Give him a hug. He’ll prob.. read more
Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

Haha, yup, that's better 😄 Love over hate. Thanks



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This dream of yours had me balancing on the precipice of hell. What a scary place to find yourself. You realized the danger and pulled back. You recognized the foe and you woke up at the right moment. Felt the tension here. Enjoes the read.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

That had been quite the dream indeed, whew! Thank you so much for your empathetic review. But who kn.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

You have to show the foe that light wins over dark and love over hate. Give him a hug. He’ll prob.. read more
Archishman Rick

1 Year Ago

Haha, yup, that's better 😄 Love over hate. Thanks

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Added on September 27, 2022
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Archishman Rick
Archishman Rick

West Bengal, India



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A fellow in my mid twenty's, I have a knack to challenge myself mentally and physically. Whether it strengthens or softens my general naivety, I do not know. I hope to find, and trust the worth in t.. more..

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