Deep Wilds

On my lone ventures to the cryptic depths,

Of ghastly woods, ghoulish caves and dead ends,

The shadows swept far as I walked tall,

I watched if slivers of light could fall,

Through crippling clutches I let ensnare,

The prospect of sunk in liberation,

In this harsh abyss is worth the dare.

I turn to face the perplexing pits,

Seemingly too much for worn out wits,

Perhaps these uncertain parts are where,

The ancient lady of the night sits,

Embracing the dark with gruesome grace,

She leaves no opening in the maze.

But through the phantasm I see ways,

On which blood is drained but flows like art,

Within deep wilds where I spend these days,

The place where I found my lion-heart.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Here's to the "deep wilds". I've spent quite a few days there in the woodland ravines and the grand company of nature. Some never ponder the flight of golden eagles or the swiftness of rainbow fish in clear, cold streams. But that's the sort of things I've lived for. I've got to say it definitely beats the confines of air-conditioned office cubicles and stuffy boardrooms by a country mile. ;) Your work is a pleasure to read.

[Archishman Rick]

Thank you sincerely for the appreciation, and I perhaps couldn't agree more with your take. I've had a few limited time exposures to the unadulterated parts of nature, but I have always been fascinated by them and I certainly wish to visit much more.

[Neville]

an intriguing title caught my eye whilst passing .. I dived in and my word, I was not disappointed .. N :)

[Archishman Rick]

Thank you sincerely, Neville. Am really glad to hear that. Hope you have a great one ahead :)

[Neville]

you are most welcome & you too :)

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh to babe i your early 20's and writing poetry... Much of my earlier poetry was written in the early 70's...I was 22 year old then!!
I really did enjoy your poem...
So many metaphors to ponder... Reading it again now for the third time...
Lisa, now in Spain

[Archishman Rick]

I really appreciate your thoughtful words. Am really happy that you enjoyed. These metaphors are always open for the facets of your imagination. Kudos to you for having walked the path in your journey since then, and Godspeed moving forward.
Best wishes.

[Lisasview]

Yes, walking the path is my adventure through life...and, although not always easy I have enjoyed every minute being here...
Lisa

[Lisasview]

In my original post to you I meant Oh gosh...to be in your...
I was typing way too fast...sorry

[Archishman Rick]

Yeaa no worries , thanks again for stopping by Ms. Lisa :) May you keep walking

[Lisasview]

Thank you!!