Timeless Travel

Back when the cosmos took form,

Shrouded in darkness it lurked,

And when dimensions were born,

It crossed the spaces to work.

For transcending the limits,

Beyond where angels could fly,

Power stretching past the pits,

Where ancient rakshasas cry.

With virtues built for the soul,

Made to enlighten the show,

There it inspires each role, 

With plenty stages to go.

Reviews

[Kari Rakitan]

I like this one. It reaches into the realm of spirituality liberated from the constraints of religion.

[Archishman Rick]

Thanks :) agreed, it intends to pierce all bounds unto infinity.

[Chris Shaw]

You took me back to the big bang. There was certainly an explosion of energy and colours in this write. Fascinating to contemplate the start of it all, and what we have now and what will endure forever more. Good read.

Chris

[Archishman Rick]

Thank you for the profound review, Ms. Christine! That's why it is named 'Timeless Travel', in line with that contemplation.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.