Saint of Death

This is my first story, always thought about making this into a song but never had time up untill now. Please excuse the explicit language, but this is how it has to be told this way so you get it.

Pain is a terrible thing that we all go through. . . 

Why does life have to give us all this bullshit, it hurts us and those who we hold dear.

The ones I loved got killed and sinned.

I cursed and swore to the sky cursing the one who did this to me.

The devil made a deal with me, he said

" For your soul and allegiance i will give you your revenge and eternal life".

Why I yelled why the f**k lord have you done this to me.

The Danmed champion arose that night killing the ones who killed his loved ones and him.

HaHaHAahahaa, I AM THE SAINT OF DEATH, The grim reaper himself, even the danmed one.

Death is my name and always will death comes to all you cant even run you pitiful people. 

I will no longer show mercy im going TO F*****g KILL YOUUUUUUUUUU!

You people did this to me made me who i am today dont say its my fault its yours!

I serve the devil only no one else! His word my command, never defied because of this gift.

This syth of mine slain countless, and still counting hAhAhaaaa!

You cannot defeat me im immortal! Never will die my rage is immortal itself!

What you people did is unforgivable and my pain will never die out.

Haha enjoy death mabey not today but one day you will be mine!

Im leaving this place seeking out revenge elsewhere. . .

 

Author's Note

Im sorry for any grammar problems it was something I wanted to write for people to enjoy not to get mad at grammar problems. Its something ive made up in my head dfor years. In class i would be making this line after line in my mind ENJOY!:)
also this picture was drawn by one of my friends and then made some small edits on computer.she knew what grim reaper ment not some fake over looked undead guy. She made the perfect image of him to me

Reviews

[flowers_roses]

exelent. but a little scarey..... :) but good i love stories and poems and evrything :D

[Erin]

Gosh....it's kind of a really scary piece, but it's good. I didn't see a whole lot of "terrible" grammar problems, what I did see was that "Danmed" is spelled "Damned." Nice try, though. But I really liked this piece. It's going in my library.

[Archaos Broductions]

haha well thats good to hear :P. and sure :)

[hippityhoppitybippitybo..]

This story made me lol XD (Which is a good thing, I guess, seeing how I haven't even once laughed today) Anyway, I'm kinda new so I was wondering if you could review some of my stuff? :)))