Chapter Eleven/Twelve *Untitled*

Chapter Eleven/Twelve *Untitled*

A Chapter by Tsukin Archangel
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Ok, super short chapter, but hey it does what is needed, you find out what teh whispers are, hope you like it :3 be sure to review

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I woke with a start, and looked around frantically half expecting to see the living room and my angry parents, but instead I was in my room, in my bed, comfortable, as if I hadn’t almost died yesterday. It made me wonder for a moment if maybe it had all been a dream, just a really, really vivid and disturbing one. But I quickly displaced that theory, cause even though the whispers had lessened drastically they were still there, a constant reminder of what had almost happened to me last night.

I climbed out of my bed and stretched, working the numbness of sleep out of my body, and then got dressed for school. Suddenly I heard a slightly louder whisper and I focused on it, the voice sounded like Volt, she must be here. Hmmm, hot pink…or neon green? Gold is just getting soooo old She said, I could almost see her twirling her hair around her finger absentmindedly as she said that.

“Hot pink,” I said as Volt entered my room.
She looked at me surprised, her finger stopping mid twirl (ha, I had been right), “What?”
“You just said ‘Hmm, hot pink or neon green? Gold is getting so old’ I’m just saying I think hot pink looks better.”
“I didn’t say that,” She said shaking her head and looking like she saw a ghost, “I thought it.”

It was silent for a moment as her words hung in the air. I sat down as they sunk in. That’s what the whispers had been…thoughts.

“Oh, s**t,” I said slapping myself on the forehead, “I should’ve guessed. That’s just wonderful, I new trick to make me more of a freak.”

Volt sat next to me and put her arm around my shoulder.

“Well, you’ll always be my freaky friend.”
“Thanks,” I said, leaning into her, “I cant believe it…I’m a telepath.”


© 2012 Tsukin Archangel


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WOW I had a sudden shock there. He's a telepath! 100/100 I didn't think about that!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

12 Years Ago

lol yep hes a telepath, can see the future....whats the missing link~
I new trick? what is that a typo...
I'm enjoying this...
telepath, huh

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

12 Years Ago

its all good it helps me edit when i finish lol
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

*grin*
Tsukin Archangel

12 Years Ago

:3
I LOVE THIS!!!!! even though its really short, its my favorite chapter so far...AHAHA i love dare..and hes a telepath; thats just too awesome to put into words. GOOD JOB!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now we all know the secret :) Good job again. I'm um... surprised he didn't figure it out-I guess though, screaming people don't really leave room for thought. Just one thing you might wanna change though-where you have written about tricks to make him look like a freak, it looks like an 'I'. But it's not really a problem... unless it is an I. Anyway, I liked the way Volt consoled him, it made me giggle :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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