New Beginnings

My attempt at a Haiku

Death is not an end

It is a new beginning

Don't cry when I die

Author's Note

tell me what you think. Are the syllables right? 5 7 5

Reviews

[Cynthia Man]

Yeah, the syllables are right, I always love Haiku very much, as it's always straightforward and its simple. I found this one really creepy as well, death have been something I can't find myself thinking about it without silvering :)
Nice written!

[Tsukin Archangel]

sweet :3 ah death...i dont really see a point in fearing it when its inevitible i say ust live life to its fullest but thanks glad u thought it was good :3

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SCARY and CREEPY describe this perfectly! 100/100 Great write!

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol yeah im just kinda like everyone dies please dont despair over it, its not worth the effort

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:)

[Tsukin Archangel]

i know such a positive outlook lol

[SmileBig :)]

Creepy! Lol you should check out my haiku :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol sure will do :3

[Tsukin Archangel]

oh and i posted the lyrics lol

[SmileBig :)]

Lol ok I'll check it out :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

woot saw u saw it lol

[Brittany]

The syllables are right. Maybe try a more original idea?