Chapter One/Two: *Untitled*

First? Second? Who knows It'll get put together somehow im not really worried bout it right now I just know theres a break right here~ Meet Volt peeps :3

Volt sighed and twirled her gold streaked hair around her finger, lazily laying on my bed, her history book in hand, reading something about the civil war, that something probably being the same sentence for the past twenty minutes.

“Ok,” She said with mild exasperation, “ Let’s take a break.”

I raised an eyebrow, “Did you even finish that page yet?”

“Of course I did”

“Really?”

“Duh,” She said uneasily.

I looked at her skeptically and sighed.

 “You know you’re a horrible liar right?”

“Isn’t that a good thing?”

“Yeah if you’re not trying to make anyone believe your telling the truth,” I said with a  smirk.

“Well whatever, I’m gonna go get something to drink, you coming?”

I shrugged, “ Sure.”

Volt hopped off my bed tossing the history book carelessly to the side and walked out the door. I shook my head, a hint of a smile playing on my lips, probably the closest I ever really got to one, knowing that we would probably not open that book again tonight.

I followed her into my kitchen where she was busily scrounging around through the refrigerator looking for the drink she knew would be there, orange soda. 

She exclaimed triumphantly when she found it, hidden way in the back of the fridge, waiting just for her. It was kind of an unspoken law here. Since she spent so much of her time with us, there was always a little something for her. No one else in my family drank the stuff, personally I couldn’t stand the carbonation. 

She sighed contently as she downed the drink  smacking her lips with satisfaction. I poured myself a glass of pineapple juice, my personal favorite.

“Think anything cool is gonna happen tomorrow?” Volt asked suddenly.

“Hmm…” I fingered my glass lightly waiting for the sensation of absolute truth to come over me like it always did with a question as direct as this, “Yes.”

She nodded without another word, she knew I’d be right, my hunches were never wrong.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A good chapter. I enjoyed the conversation. I like the real life feel of the story. Thank you for sharing the excellent chapter.
Coyote

[Tsukin Archangel]

thanks :O Lol have u never read the beginning to this story before?

[Coyote Poetry]

I started. I'm catching up on 1300 read requests. I don't mine. Make me write and think.

[Tsukin Archangel]

oh shiz lol I see~ Yeah cause I remember u reviewing the later chaps lol, well then You'll get to my newer story eventually lol

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Great chapter I have to say! I love Volt as a character! Looks like me when I don't want to study! LOL! 100/100

[Tsukin Archangel]

Lol right? I think alot of us can relate to Volt and her inability to study lol

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I know! lol :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

and of course the hmmmmm ima go take a break now and procrastinate by doing everything BUT what we're supposed to lol

[The dark story]

wow.again my blessings are with you for presenting an interesting story with us.....hats off to you!!!!!!!

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol thanks :3 Glad u like it hey am i the only one who noticed the fact that like the reviews come out of order? Thats kinda odd lol

[The dark story]

"come out of orders???".what do you mean with this??.sorry.but please .clarify this,the writing minister>:P

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol like i got your review for like lets say chap 5 b4 2 and it kinda weird

[The dark story]

well.it's because.i reviewed chapter i first and then the second...so ofcourse it will first show you the last of my comment...

[Tsukin Archangel]

hmmm i c lol

[The dark story]

lot of "Lol".i really can't imagine that if you're that funny guy.than how come you write a poem on your aggression.."Anger"..??????..i really can't think of you being aggressive!!!!!!

[Tsukin Archangel]

people are multi dimensional theres the me the world see's and then the me they dont see the one i put to paper to vent

[The dark story]

hhmmmmm..you're pretty right...that's what great author do..put their feelings and thoughts in a paper....

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol well i wouldnt consider myself a great writer just a troubled teen lol with an outlet

[The dark story]

but i do consider it.you can't change that."My decisions and thoughts are like the northern stars"

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol thats a nice quote~....*steals* FACEBOOK TIME!

[The dark story]

hahahahahahahahahaaahh.....that's not mine ofcourse........it's my fav..from Shakespeare's work:Julius ceaser's dialogue.and excuse me.i'm not a facebook user.........i'm too young for it:P

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol well i ended up ust putting it in my uh about me here lol

[The dark story]

o.o ....o.O.o.O....what is that."ust"."uh".don't you get irritated by those red lines under your text.??!!.....and yeah..i thought of you as intelligent.but you're "budhdhu"(hindi word:stupid in cute sense).why the hell i have used inverted commas over there???.......ofcourse to let you know that i'm quoting someone's dialogue.......huh!!!!.you said that i have stolen that!!!!:P :P :P.

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol i figured u didnt make that quote and whoops typo ust = Just and uh is like when someone pauses unsure of what to say then they go like uhhhh blah blah blah

[~loud whispers~]

You did it agian really good endings!

[Tsukin Archangel]

:3 Glad i can successfully end :3

[ShadowFaux]

I like this =) obviously you've grown as a writer compared to the last piece of writing I looked at. I like the nickname Volt, she already seems to fit it to a T, Volt does not sound like someone who would be able to study...

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol no shes like....quirky...these characters are probably much more developed than the last one you read I could probably answer any question about them...my brother gets kinda freaked out when i do that lol

[Rhianne Ney]

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[Tsukin Archangel]

"..." good? "..." bad?

[Rhianne Ney]

Good...

[Tsukin Archangel]

ok good thats good lol that was like huh? "..."?

[Rhianne Ney]

yeah... hhaha

[laura]

This is awesome for the beginning. :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

woot woot :3 glad u thought so ;3 hope u enjoy the rest~

[laura]

Thank you, sorry for late reply a lot going on. I hope you had a good holidays?

[Tsukin Archangel]

Ah thanks! I did! Did you? And all good stuff happens

[laura]

That's great too hear, I have hit a writers block.

[Tsukin Archangel]

AH that sux D; Hope you get through it soon :3

[laura]

Thank you, me too.

[Tsukin Archangel]

no problem :3

[Tamelia Jade]

Great start :) I like your descriptions and the dialogue :)