Anger

Is a tad pissed soooo I write a poem lol, hope you can tell, its not particularly long so u might not see any of the feeling but i feel like any longer would b overkill the last sentence summing it up

I see how you try to blame me

For all the wrongs you have commited

I see how you glare at me 

When you think there's enough distance

I see how you laugh at me 

When you think my back is turned

But do not expect me to feel ashamed

When I watch you weep and burn

Reviews

[Summer D.]

Length is petty. Meaning is all.
Good poem; a little bit late on wishing your well-being but I hope everything turned out well.

Only thing, "weep and burn." Didn't click for me. Contrats are great but this seemed like one out of place.

Maybe revise?

Good write anyhow.
*85*

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Short yet very powerful. I love the feeling that comes out of it. Great piece!

[Tsukin Archangel]

thank you :3 I'm glad my emotions reached you! Thanks for Criticing :3

[The dark story]

you have expressed your thoughts and emotion in so few words.the diction you have used is pretty nice...the aggression you have put really makes it worthy of the title......the end is really very grave which i liked a lot...overall.a nice poem..but you know what.too much aggression is not good for health:P

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol and thats why i write ;3 Glad u liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel of anger and disappointment. Some people can test our patience and made us walk on a fine line of insanity. I like the ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[FJ Davis]

It appears true "poetic justice" will eventually be meted out.
Seem fair to me.

[Mr.Allegory]

I like the length of this and it gets the point across. Does this have to do with that conversation I left from? I hope you feel better~ ||Hugs||
It's a nice poem nonetheless~ The ending made me lift an eyebrow by the intensity of it. Good job~

-Ego