A Study of Existence

Just a little song I was working on, what existence is, life? Death? Heaven? Hell? What is the answer?

Hide me in the clouds

Or here in this ground 

My wilted rose

Feel the cold

Tell me do you know

Why I feel this ardor

Tell me

What is my existence?

Gentle flakes are but whispers

In this growing fervor

Pena and desese per vitam

(Pain and suffering through life)

Gaudium et felicitas per mortem?

(Joy and happiness through death?)

Ignem caelestem Infernalis glacies, Cruentus Tellus

(Heavenly fire, Hellish Ice, Bloody Earth)

Est hoc quod nos vocamus existential

(Is this what we call existence?)

Hide me in the clouds

Or here in this ground 

My wilted rose

Feel the cold

Tell me do you know

Why I feel this ardor

Tell me

What is my existence?

Arma morte ad vitam æternam

(To arms, To death, To life eternal)

Author's Note

Notes:
Ardor in this sense i used to mean heat or flame

TELL ME WHATCHA THINK!!! If you want a demo lemmee know i can add it lol

Reviews

[The dark story]

"Pena and desese per vitam
(Pain and suffering through life)
Gaudium et felicitas per mortem?
(Joy and happiness through death?)
Ignem caelestem Infernalis glacies, Cruentus Tellus
(Heavenly fire, Hellish Ice, Bloody Earth)
Est hoc quod nos vocamus existential
(Is this what we call existence?)"...

these are my favourite lines ...truly these are just awesome!!
may i know which language is this? please p[lease please

and the theme of this poem is truly great and thought provoking...it's truly intriguing...
i guess our life is an exam and the result is declared on our death...if we pass the test..we lies in heaven and if we don't...unfortuantely that's the hell...this is what i think..i'm sorry i;m too stupid so probably i would have been mistaken in making out the clear meaning of our existence!!
but thanks for sharing this brilliant write with us!!

[Tsukin Archangel]

AH! The language there is latin and yes in fact that is pretty much the message of the song. Where are we going, do we go to heaven do we go to hell, do we just remain here. Is there anything better, is this the worse? Etc. Etc. It's contemplating what's next :3

[The dark story]

oh…I think that sometimes I become sensible sometimes!!!

[PurpleQuartz]

Marvelously wonderful writing!!!

[Tsukin Archangel]

AH! THANKS! This is actually kinda freakily Ironic lol, I'd just opened this up to show someone and now theirs a comment on it lol timing is very ironic...yeah lol

[Tsukin Archangel]

hope you enjoy my other poems, writings watev, if u ever do read em lol

[PurpleQuartz]

Lol :D That is ironic!

[PurpleQuartz]

I think I will read more of your writing! It's really good!

[Tsukin Archangel]

right? total freak occurance

[PurpleQuartz]

: D

[Tsukin Archangel]

Ah! Thanks! Hope you enjoy it :3 Tis one of the only things I have t offer the world lol...besides my singing but yeah diff plane lol

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Hmm... It was lovely intriguing and I would really love to hear it XD I'm a sucker for all these lyrics then songs then yeah...

A really thought provoking piece

:D

[Tsukin Archangel]

yes yes yes~~ I'll be sure to post a link whenever i do the final piece lol and YES THINK ABOUT IT !!! THE POINT OF MY MUSIC IS TO MAKE THOUGHTS HAPPEN...none of that dance and drink till im dead nonsense...no offense Will.I.Am i want my stuff to have actual meaning :/

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

So true!! D: That's why I don't listen to those... uhhh.... popular songs nowadays. I'd either hear remakes of awesome songs that has nothing to do with drinking, songs about partying, songs about partying AND drinking, songs about partying, drinking AND dancing or songs about partying, drinking, dancing AND screwing a total hot stranger

It gets tiresome at times that's why my playlist, as some people call it, is pretty retro. I have new stuff but not so popular bands though :/

So I applaud you for not making my ears bleed with all those nonsensical songs :9

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol your oh so welcome~.....I aught to be uploading a new story soon :3

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

oh~ do tell :D

[Tsukin Archangel]

ah yep~ I have uploaded it now lol

[Horizon K.]

Quite lovely and thoughtful. The Latin? Was beautiful. The loveliest song lyrics are those poetic that connect with anyone, and certainly these are like that, questions we all have.

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol yes it is latin and thanks i tired to make something...human and with meaning besides u know get drunk have sex party hard nonesense

[T*Fuyumi]

Omg I was kinda awed with the non-english parts *A* Gave me more chills down my spine >///< And I like the first two sentences, I have no idea why but I feel like it clicks with me! I WANNA HEAR YOU SING ITZ :D

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol latin is beautiful gotta love it and yeah ok i can show u am demo on skype lol

[Coyote Poetry]

"Arma morte ad vitam æternam
(To arms, To death, To life eternal)"
I tell people. Ain't going to hell or heaven. I will be drinking bad wine and hanging with the Poet's and writer's who saw the truth in Purgatory. I never met a person who touched heaven or hell. We will learn what is true one day. Good description led to the excellent ending.
Coyote

[Tsukin Archangel]

THANKS!! GLAD U THINK SO! i was going for deep and kinda like makes u think