Internal Suffocation

depressing drabbles that fit my mood

I want to scream

I want to shout

I can not let any of it out

No way to alleviate the pain

The anger

The hate

The negativity

No way to sing praises

To hold joy in my grasp

To bask in the glow of the sun

No

I am lost

Trapped

Forgotten

Unforgiven

Left in the darkness to rot

My internal struggle worming to the top

Through my pores

Out my eyes

My ears

My mouth

My teeth

I am but an empty husk

Not truly alive

An imitaion of what once was

I  can feel no more

I am locked in a cage

I am nothing

Reviews

[Scott Mou]

I Loved it. The Depressing feel was.....just that! I especially liked the first verse. I always have been a sucker for darker poetry though, but nevertheless a great read!

[Tsukin Archangel]

Lol thanks! Yeah, well I tend to only write poetry when I'm under intense emotional stress which could be positive but sadly is usually negative, so if you like dark poetry fell free to check out my other poems cause they all kinda fall in the same vein.... well minus broken glass... that one is me delving into the mind of a psychopath... but yeah! Glad you liked it :3

[T*Fuyumi]

ohmygod I loved this entire thing. Like really. o.o
How you brought out the feelings of suffocation and suffering in the front followed by how the emotions bottled up all oozed out painfully leaving a person feeling so lifeless and empty. It made me cringe at certain parts which is a good thing of course! :D ganbatte for all future writings!! :D

[Tsukin Archangel]

THANKS! I just kinda followed my emotional tangent when writing it and voila u get this depressing piece of writing >;3 hope u like feautre stoofz!

[~loud whispers~]

Its great that when i go in here afterthe longest time that this is one of the first things that is see. good job and read my newest stuff please i haven't been on for a while but it would really help :3

[Tsukin Archangel]

LOL the irony of that statement...well to me its a tad ironic...cause...this is really kinda depressing but you know GLAD U LIKED AND SURE...once all this college stuff is done and i have time again ^^;

[zainul]

Perfectly written.
Eloquently expressed.

[Tsukin Archangel]

Why thank you~ I try...well no not really i kinda just write...and LET THE FEELINGS FLOW!