Broken Wings...

Being Deceived in love is a part of a life...

Do you remember the time,

            when together we used to dine?

Do you remember the rain,

            when together we walked like insane?

How could you change?

I don't understand... it seems so strange.

Did you forget the past?

How could you, for it was so vast.

Our love was so pure,

                      we would be together, i was so sure

Then why did you hide yourself in darkness?

How could you be so heartless?

I thought you were true,

                that was the reason, i was into you.

I gave you all i had,

but you made me sad.

For you love was just a deal,

this wound would never heal.

  

       

Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

descriptive ... well written.. flows well I like your courageousness in writing this !

[Pradeep Nair]

A great poet once christened his work as Broken Wings...
Hope you remember him..

However vast the past be...
it is forgotten in the tides of time..

Really done good..

[Sami Khalil]

I like the ending.

[Dev...]

Well Scripted...., Its really touchy....

[Jeff]

Sad piece, but it resonates in me.