Dead Love

" Tears frozen,

                       cold heart,

      Numb body...

This is what I have become.

No solace in worldly affairs,

No respite in things , that i once used to enjoy..

My soul is desperate like a caged bird..

She wants to be free from my body...

She wants to fly higher and higher...

How can a chirpy and lively soul live in my cold and numb body??

I need to set her free...

I will certainly hear her plea... And why not?

For whom shall i live?

The only reason I had, is gone.. gone forever...

I know i will never see him again..."  Lost in thought , She suddenly stood up, there was a deadly smile on her face.

She went to the kitchen, took a knife,

Poked herself with it, till the last drop of blood came out of her body...

She laid there... she laid there, dead in the pool of blood,

But this is not the end, her soul is free and happy...

The only reason for which she died...

She died happily... yes, she was happy...

happy to be dead...

 

                    

 

Reviews

[poetic soul]

death can be so peaceful sometimes....no one really wants to understand this...i loved this poem of yours and i totally loved these lines:

But this is not the end, her soul is free and happy...
The only reason for which she died...
She died happily... yes, she was happy...
happy to be dead...

read them over and over again...really very nice!!! keep it up gal!!

:) Love,
Krishna

[Hopelessly Confused]

One of the most powerful and amazing poems I've ever read. You don't know how true this poem is to my life. Sometimes I just wanted to die and if I did I would die happy because I would be free. Even though this poem relates to me I hope you haven't had to go trough anything that made you truly feel like that. Your an amazing writer
With love from a

[Khaaki]

the poem is wonderful but death, according to me, is not is in our hands... just as birth is not...

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

Very emotional piece, I think you could change the word poked to something a little more descriptive. Nice write!

[Jujubee_:]]

This is a very strong piece, It very much reminds me of myself. I love it, I can feel the sadness, the pain even. Keep writing hun. This is great.

[Amy]

sad but beautiful realy well writen

[Alicante lullaby]

lovely,one of your best works so far,,,,but really,mujhay preshan kar dia,sub theek hai naa,,,,are you okay,,,sad but very beautiful,,,,

[Blackcat]

Quite scary!! You have wonderfully portrait the plea of a heart broken girl...

[Dead_End]

Sad... but it's so wonderfully composed that while reading it i felt all this was happening in front of me... Only one thought came to my mind if only i could stop her and save her from painful death...Wonderful!! keep writing

[Blue tailed kite]

Amazingly beautiful