Who Is She?????

If you are a girl, then you know what i am talking about.......

She is born to bear the pain,

God has created her to suffer.

Her emotion is her greatest enemy...

Emotions made her life more complex than ever,

Even if others try, they will never understand her.

For every wrong, she is the only one to be blamed,

no matter if it's her fault or not, every one will blame her for their messy life.

Dirty eyes never fail to reach her, everyone is seeking an oppertunity to have feast on her.

Everyone tries to use her for their benefits.

If she tries to stand against the injustice, She is made to suffer like never before.

She is seeking a valid answer for her existence in this cruel world.

She is still wondering about her sins, why should she suffer so much??

Why is she  destined to suffer in her whole life...She is doomed..Why???

Are you still wondering who is she...

You know her, everyone knows her,

She is a "GIRL"

Author's Note

please ignore grammar and spelling mistakes...

Reviews

[Khaaki]

exceptional... it's really sad that some men still think that they are superior... and unfortunately men have twisted history and facts to lower the status of women... e.g.,eve is responsible for luring adam into having the forbidden fruit etc etc... but i just know 1 thing..."heaven must be really small b'coz i can see it in my mom's eyes..." great write archana

[THERISA]

Although not born biologically female, your poem could be describing my life. My struggles to be accepted by myself, first, and then the world around me. Knowing that i will never be, either gender. Always, somewhere in the middle. Not all suffering is limited to biological females, but should include the transgendered community. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

[LeeLee Ryder]

"Dirty eyes never fail to reach her, everyone is seeking an opportunity to have feast on her."
I like this very much.. so true.. Wo-man suffers but endures... bends but never breaks...
Being a girl has always been diffucult but thru thick & thin.. We go on & become as strong
as tooth & nails..
Kudos
LeeLee

[Sketch]

Awe I like this, you got your thoughts and ideas out very well and clearly. =) Great job!

~Sketch

[Blackcat]

Great work!! The msg you conveyed through this poem is apparent.. We can't develop into a good human until we learn to respect women.

[Mystic]

You are right sometimes Girl's emotion is her enemy, but this is what makes us different from guys. I am glad Dead_end is now going to start respecting girls which we truly deserve...

[Dead_End]

Although I am not a girl but i could understand what you wanna portray through this poem... Here after I am gonna respect girls... This poem was an eye opener... Wonderful!!!