Beautiful Dream...

A beautiful dream where i had a chance to meet the Almighty .......

I had a beautiful dream!

God, himself came to me..

I was mermerized to see him.

I suprisingly asked him the reason for his visit.

he smiled...

seeing him smiling, even i smiled.

We walked a while...

suddenly a question came to my mind,

I asked,"Holy Father! can i get my lost loved ones back????"

He looked at me but said nothing and again smiled,

He started walking.. I followed him...

There were so many questions and i wanted the answer..

I asked again," Can I know my future????"

Smiled again and started walking in the direction of light...

But I was almost exhausted,

I wanted answers to my questions.

I couldn't bear the silence between us.

I wanted him to talk...

Suddenly he looked at me again , but this time he was pointing towards something...

I looked there..

I almost shouted with what i saw..

I couldn't believe .. it was heaven..

HEAVEN!!!!!!! How could it be??? am i dead???

While i was lost in thoughts...

I heard a voice saying,"My child! This is my place.. I am with you to answer all your doubts".

Before I could say anything, He said," My child! Why are you crying over those whom you have lost? Why can't you values those who are with you??

Why do you want to know your future? Tell me my child.. can an innocent lamb jumb merrily and live happily if he knows that he is destined to be killed??

I am your father.. I can never do anything that may harm you... everything is for your good... Learn to accept everything you get.. I am with you my child......"

I was mesmerizingly looking at him..

couldn't believe he was talking to me..

but suddenly every thing looked blurred...

I was going away from God.. I shouted," no.. no.. I want to talk to you.. stop!! stop!!!...."

but everything was slowly and slowly fading away......

Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

This is Brilliantly Written, I enjoyed The Lesson And Story Behind this, Treasure What You Have In Life, And Let Go Of What You've Lost As It Wasn't Meant To Be And You're Life And Futre Are Being Mapped Out Accordingly So Have Faith And Live For The Momment Of The Day As Tomorrow Will Take Care Of Itself And Yesterday Is Gone! :-)

[Vertu Rose]

I am religious so I imagined myself walking along and feeling the power of his words. Thank you for sharing this enchanting piece. And the metaphor of the lamb was very emotional for me. Continue to write with such emotion.

[Blackcat]

Amazing!!!!!!!!!! just like your poem title it's beautiful...... God has indeed done the right by hiding our future.... I liked the example of lamb..... wonderful.... your poem left me breathless.....

[Abd-afeez]

It delivers a message. Its just so wonderful with that spice of extra ordinance you added. Keep it up.

[sweet angel]

you left me breathless.............. It was so good!!!!!!!!!10/10..........

[Dead_End]

what a unique piece... awesome..... You are indeed a very good writer... I agree with others it's superb... keep writing..

[sudeshna]

SOMETIMES OUR DREAMS CLEAR OUR CONFUSIONS... AND IT GIVES ANSWERS TO OUR QUESTIONS... U HAVE BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN YOUR DREAM .. I LIKED IT...

[ALifeAquatic]

What amazes me is that some of the best poetry that I have read in the English language, was in fact formed outside the English speaking world!

Like Sahar said, you manage to say so much in so, "little," words, it just adds to the sheer impact of this piece. It was breathtaking and very refreshing my mind is always opened up to the possibilities when I read something so different from the norm!

Thank you for the kind review by the way!

AHouseOfChambers

[Alicante lullaby]

you have said so much in so little,this marks the thinker in you,instead of wandering in dark alleys of unknown future,lets live in present,why mourn on what is lost,lets treasure what is present with us;good