Beautiful Dream...

A beautiful dream where i had a chance to meet the Almighty .......

I had a beautiful dream!

God, himself came to me..

I was mermerized to see him.

I suprisingly asked him the reason for his visit.

he smiled...

seeing him smiling, even i smiled.

We walked a while...

suddenly a question came to my mind,

I asked,"Holy Father! can i get my lost loved ones back????"

He looked at me but said nothing and again smiled,

He started walking.. I followed him...

There were so many questions and i wanted the answer..

I asked again," Can I know my future????"

Smiled again and started walking in the direction of light...

But I was almost exhausted,

I wanted answers to my questions.

I couldn't bear the silence between us.

I wanted him to talk...

Suddenly he looked at me again , but this time he was pointing towards something...

I looked there..

I almost shouted with what i saw..

I couldn't believe .. it was heaven..

HEAVEN!!!!!!! How could it be??? am i dead???

While i was lost in thoughts...

I heard a voice saying,"My child! This is my place.. I am with you to answer all your doubts".

Before I could say anything, He said," My child! Why are you crying over those whom you have lost? Why can't you values those who are with you??

Why do you want to know your future? Tell me my child.. can an innocent lamb jumb merrily and live happily if he knows that he is destined to be killed??

I am your father.. I can never do anything that may harm you... everything is for your good... Learn to accept everything you get.. I am with you my child......"

I was mesmerizingly looking at him..

couldn't believe he was talking to me..

but suddenly every thing looked blurred...

I was going away from God.. I shouted," no.. no.. I want to talk to you.. stop!! stop!!!...."

but everything was slowly and slowly fading away......

Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

This is Brilliantly Written, I enjoyed The Lesson And Story Behind this, Treasure What You Have In Life, And Let Go Of What You've Lost As It Wasn't Meant To Be And You're Life And Futre Are Being Mapped Out Accordingly So Have Faith And Live For The Momment Of The Day As Tomorrow Will Take Care Of Itself And Yesterday Is Gone! :-)

[Nayan]

Such free flow as I read from the start to the last words of the poem...

[heart_breaker]

this one is so beautifully written! i could see the movements in the poem... a very powerful write!

[Brokensoul]

This is so very spiritual and enlightening ! There is so much serenity in your words!

[Gary McDonald]

What a poem!!! I am not all that religious and still I have fallen in love with your words. I like the message of moving on from loss and this poem as a whole. Thank you, Thank you so much for writing this poem and sharing it.

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow...!!this was really beautiful..:)

great work.!!

[Amy]

I love the way you have writen out your dream

[Jujubee_:]]

Wow, This is beautifully written. The lesson indeed is very true as Katrina said, Live for the moment because you'll never get it back. x]

[Simone]

So amazing, I agree with Katrina Mckeown. and very very nicely written. I like your formatting and writing style. Keep it up!

[Cordell]

WOW hmm maybe he came to you so you can write a GREAT poem like this I really like this poem ALOT! Way 2 Go :)