******DARKNESS*****

Darkness is singing , the grim ballad of hell.

It is ready to take over this beautiful world.

Everyone is now madly dancing to it's tune..

Humanity, love, affection...

all the feelings are now dead.

The beautiful quote "Live and Let Live"

is now a funny joke!

Killing for survival is the order of the day.

Devil has become your new God!!

There is no hope for light!!

If you want to live, you have to kill..

And if you kill, you , yourself become a devil!!

Reviews

[Blackcat]

indeed a dark one!!! this one is really good.... you shown the true world.... This is what the reality is.... every feeling is dead now... great work!!!!

[Mystic]

I loved this poem!! especially the first line.... good job!!

[Dead_End]

Good write....I liked the way you started the poem..."Darkness is singing , the grim ballad of hell"...... and the ending line.... superb!! You clearly depicted the reality of todays world!!!

[Alicante lullaby]

moving,lovely how you criticised the poeple's modern view of life,and the survival of the best idealogy,loved the end,chaa gai ho yaar,great,,,,

[LeeLee Ryder]

Wow ... dramatic, moving & dark
no hope for light is right.
today's truth slaps you in the face these days...
someone better wake us up & you have..
Great last 5 lines.. especially
the devil has become your new god..
Kudos
LeeLee