First Kiss.........

The freshness and beauty of our first kiss,

is still alive in my mind..

it never seems to fade away.

That moment still drives me crazy,

makes me fall for you again and again.......

 

I still remember our first kiss....

your eyes constantly  looking at me

our conversation almost came to an end

you were smiling and licking your lips...

subtly finding ways to touch me...

 

slowly slowly you were leaning towards me..

your head was tilted..

you were so close to me that,

i could hear your heart beats clearly.....

 

As you came further closer,

my heart beats grew faster and faster...

you further tighten your grip on me....

your lips toching mine...

our first kiss.....

i still remember it clearly...

i remember how your constant eye contact made me blush for a while...

i remember it clearly beacuse,

that was the time when time stood still...

there was a perfect silence everywhere...

that silence was a witness of  eternal love...

that wasn't just an ordinary meet of two lips,

out of adrenal rush.....

but it a meet of two souls.... two world...two ideologies........

Reviews

[Scissorhandds4eva<3]

I can't begin to explain how I feel about this.Instead of the exitement of OMG it's my first kiss... it was more like two spirts became one. Amazing poem. I love it.

[Blackcat]

great one.... I liked the font you chose... it adds to the beauty of poem... good write...

[Mystic]

You have so beautifully expressed first kiss...... very true!! first kiss are indeed unforgettable!!

[sweet angel]

ooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! so sensual!!!!!!!!!!

[Dead_End]

wow!!! so sensual..... it's certainly not easy to write sensual poem... poets usually feel short of words.. while describing their emotions....

[Stacey Watts]

Wow this was very beautiful. Nothing like the passion of a first kiss. This was very well written and the flow was superb. Nice job.

[Big ol' Kahuna]

Beautiful. Great subject, imagery, and structure. I also liked the pink font you chose. You did a very nice job with this.

[deeps]

I like this I can see the anticipation of the kiss!
Very well written, I like the pink font.

[*~Kristy~*]

I loved it...I know the feeling too...First kisses are always amazing...If they don't mess up...LOL

[Elvina CZq]

Ahh.. I know exactly that feeling. Although I do not want to remember my first kiss, but I do remember the one kiss I had which too sensual to taste it the second time that I couldn't forget. Nicely written with a full expression of the sensual and exotic moment you have shared. Just beautiful.. :)