Love........

a small compostion on love....................

Love kills......

but love thrills and teaches you to be chill...

Don't blame love for the mess in your life,

it's b'coz u were not right.



you took some wrong decision

and believe me thats the only reason....



Love never hurts anyone,

but no one seems to understand....

Accept love in every form,

coz it makes your life worthwhile...................

Reviews

[Hide From God]

Interesting piece you wrote here, the first stanza saying :
"Love kills......

but love thrills and teaches you to be chill...

Don't blame love for the mess in your life,

it's b'coz u were not right."

Saying that love may suck but also is such a whirlwind of emotions you do not want to pass up. Then you jump to saying don't blame it! Quite a shift! It just seems very, I'm not sure if its correct, but almost like you are annoyed with someone and just want to tell them what you think.

Regardless! A very nice write, I enjoyed your perspective on it very much! Good job!

[Blackcat]

hmmm... yeah quite contradictory.... but really a good one to read!!

[Mystic]

yeah right... love should be accepted in every form.... We shouldn't blame love for harm done to us 'cause that's the consequences of our wrong decision.....

[Dead_End]

good write!!!! You certainly know how to express urself... great!!!

[Ashlee]

This is very beautifully written. I absolutely loved the ending, accept love in every form, because it makes your life worth wile. Very true. Love is a beautiful thing, and people shouldn't blame their hurt on love

[sudeshna]

a very quick shift but yes its true love is not to be blame for the pain and the tears... nicely written...

[*~Kristy~*]

I liked it, but I do have to say that I disagree... Love can really hurt sometimes... I hope that that doesn't offend you, because I really liked the way it was written. I just, from experience, I think love is the worst form of torture... :(

[mystic soul]

When our heart breaks we tend to blame love...... "Love kills" refers to that...... but my point is love never hurts anyone.. so it must not be blamed.........