For My Mom

I'm not alone without you
but I'm not complete without you

Maybe you're not close to me
but every night I can hear your heart beat

Maybe I've never hugged you
but the warm of your arm I know it's so delightful

You taught me morals and standards
The meaning of living and all about giving

Maybe I can't always hear your voice
but I can feel your presence
because you're in me
and I'm a part of you

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It's really very deep and touching. I enjoyed the read. Keep writing :)

[Arbish K.]

Thank you :-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're most welcome

[InsertImaginativeNameHe..]

This is very sweet. It does capture a lot of emotion successfully, how you feel and stuff, the bond. I think there's a slight grammar error in the third verse: 'but the warm of your arm I know it's very delight'. I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. In any case there shouldn't be an apostrophe in the 'it's' there because it's possessive. The apostrophe for its/it's is only used for it's because it is a contraction of the words 'it is'.

Otherwise, this was a really nice poem. It seems almost sad, very beautiful. Good job.

[Arbish K.]

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes now I've edited my poem I hope now you will understand that what I want to say if you not so I will explain about it later. And thank you :-)

[InsertImaginativeNameHere]

Oh, good job. The edit works. It's what I thought you were trying to say in the first place. Well done.

[Arbish K.]

Thank you :-)

[Dalton Wagoner]

Awww! I LOVE this!!! I can really feel the emotion! :')

[Arbish K.]

Thank you Dalton for reading my poem I appreciate to hear from you have a great day ahead. :-)

[Nisreen]

A beautiful way to connect with your mum
Your first true love

I truly admire your words

[Arbish K.]

thank you dear :))