Just Friends

Just Friends

A Poem by Rose
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"His hugs are so sweet that who needs his kisses..."

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One of his friends said “You make a great couple”

when we were walking side-by-side.

We looked at each other and I held my breath,

to see what my friend would decide.

He laughed and said “We’re just friends,”

and so I smiled and laughed along,

but I had to wonder as we went

What if to him I could belong?

 

For once in my life I knew what I felt,

but still I feared pulling him nearer.

I wanted so much to figure this out;

I needed things to be clearer.

I couldn’t bear to lose him, and while we stayed friends

I could still have his hugs every day.

His hugs are so sweet that who needs his kisses.

And so “just friends” we will stay.

 

My heart’s so afraid of the drastic height

that’s necessary to achieve flight.

Nevertheless, I’ will stand upright

and try not to be overcome by fright.

I’ll keep my eyes open for any time he might

begin to see me in a different light,

for then I may escape this plight

and try to reach my shining knight.

 

© 2010 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
Written to all guys who don't realize that they are the light in someone's life.

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Thats such a romantic sweet poem, I loved it , I love those lines:

My heart's so afraid of the drastic height

that's necessary to achieve flight.

His hugs are so sweet that who needs his kisses

Thats a true friendship but I feel you want more that this, you want to beloved on real, lovers ... Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Time will tell my wee friend....Time will tell !!!
Lovely write.
Thank you for sharing
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a wonderful write and your note about this poem is so apt.. have been there and know how it feels to just be friends with a guy you actually like, but still the story continues as "we are jus friends".......

lovely

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BRAVO!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats such a romantic sweet poem, I loved it , I love those lines:

My heart's so afraid of the drastic height

that's necessary to achieve flight.

His hugs are so sweet that who needs his kisses

Thats a true friendship but I feel you want more that this, you want to beloved on real, lovers ... Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem, but remember love is a 2 way street and girls also don't realize that the are the light in someones life. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is really amazing stuff. I enjoyed the flow it takes and it brute heart felt honesty is very unique.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Notre Dame, IN



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