Genius Pond
A Book by QuothTheRaven
A story I've been writing for a while now. Kind of in pause mode.
© 2012 QuothTheRaven
Author's Note
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I wrote this in 6th-7th grade, what do you think?
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Reviews
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This is a great start, and I can't wait to read more that you add to it. I found that there were a lot of short sentences, and that could be improved by simply adding a few complex sentences. Over all though, a great start; well done! JustSomeGirl :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on August 9, 2012
Last Updated on August 9, 2012
Tags: city, of, ember, sequel
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