Caring

Caring

A Poem by Arabella Song
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Short triquain about love :)

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I used to not

care about anything.

Then I met you and everything changed.

And I hate you for it. I was content before,

without emotion. Without caring

rather I lived or died.

Now I do.


But it hurts,

This constant ache in me

No one ever tells how much love hurts.

And I do you love you. But loving you hurts so bad.

Physically hurts it's so damn intense. 

Because caring hurts worse

than all else.



© 2014 Arabella Song


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It's difficult to shut it all out..you're gonna hurt..because you are alive.
Enjoyed the anguish in your humanness ...
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Arabella Song

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott.....
Caring and ignoring are vital in our lives.
Nicely portrayed the role caring.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the meaning of this poem! Good Job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


"love hurts.

And I do you love you. But loving you hurts so bad.

Physically hurts it's so damn intense.

Because caring hurts worse

than all else."

Emotions are intense. Love is painful hence...Bravo......





Posted 10 Years Ago


Arabella Song

10 Years Ago

Oh, thanks so much! :D
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
Very nice. And I simply adore your form, like the ebb and flow of the feeling of love. Kudos.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Arabella Song

10 Years Ago

Aww, thanks! :D I appreciate the comment lots ^_^
abluehorseandflowers

10 Years Ago

The pleasure is mine :)

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Added on April 2, 2014
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Tags: Love, caring, pain, change

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Arabella Song
Arabella Song

Quebec, Canada



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