FLYING IN THE SKY

ABOUT BUILDING CONFIDANCE UP AND FACING CHALLENGES.

A hero which had to survive the toughest test of the times. People shouting out there battle cry are heard but others just walk by. Cant they see that the earth which they walk is not letting them keep. The true friends they always seek. hoping one day there heart will be complete. But the angels of the new found faith push past negativity in there wake. There is something that always was, we have forgotten it, because we have rewritten the song.

Surviving enough to breathe. Looking out on an isolated sea, the waves approaching near your feet. Can you listen to the beat? of your life that is incomplete. Standing alone but you wont pick up the phone. Realize that time is ticking by. We must all say goodbye to the familiar eyes that have been with us at our side. Erasing things out of the mind and building barriers to hide how deeply cut you are inside. Promising your going to be the guardian of your flight. paperback wings will crumble in the sun. But golden ones will keep you persisting on. Never give up because things are hard. Always keep going in till you get what you want out of life.

Reviews

[Warren Daniel II]

I really enjoyed this poem these lines "Surviving enough to breathe. Looking out on an
isolated sea, the waves approaching near your feet.
Can you listen to the beat? of your life that is
incomplete" were excellently written, great job

[Saddam]

Realize that time is ticking by. We must all say goodbye to the familiar eyes that have been with us at our side.

This one was moment of turning. Clear image though short yet powerful. Great.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most insightful and dedicated piece well done