Stand alone forever

about standing up for yourself,

Diamonds are in the eyes of the stars. There applauding so loudly you forgot about the true cause. You say your nothing but a waste. But really your an attention seeking head case. Im tired of the same bullshit playing over and over again. Its time for a change and time to unveil my wings. Im stronger now and I can see How the world works what's up against me. We are all fighting to be free in this world full of lies hatred and misery. But we make the problems that we cant see and we fall over words so easily. 

Chasing the light and ending up with a fright. Your hearts been crushed and your patience has had  enough. Giving your soul to the hypnotised wondering along with them, Then you realize your lost along the complicated path of life. Waking up and finding your stride leaving those wasters in the sands of time. But tell me when your alone do you catch yourself looking at your phone? wondering why things turned out that way. And then you remind yourself things are better off that way. It was a daily thing giving your all, but nothing back in return. Nothing lasts forever the cogs on the  clock have to change to make things better. You have to change and forget the forever. Make a stand take the risk and breathe. 

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

the line about the cogs on the clock is really good.

you know what? you should write this, like, I don't know, maybe you're attached to this style, which is f*****g fine and then totally disregard this, but like, write it out "traditionally." You have a lot of great ideas and little snatches of s**t that could be more impactful if it was broken up a bit. let the weight of your stuff sink a bit. it can. keep writing.