Heartbreaker broke melody note

poem about love anbd anguish and dreams

 

Its an icebreaker. Its an emotinal shaker.  The closer the safer. the danger of the heartbreaker.

 

Looking out the window for my hopes and dreams. Seeing rain pour down and stain the hems. Everything now is said and its the begining of the end. We are sick of tending to this piece, we try to mend. Flying away with wings that are not mine. I need to stand my ground and work it out this time. But i know you know, that you have heartbroke, this soul of mine and im forcing a connection deep inside.

 

I dont want to lie like you. I despise a piece of you was in disguise. But we got to stay strong along this hot coal line. Our hands used to be intwined. I really thought that you would be just mine. And now im doubting the little things. Did you go where you said? or did you do something else instead. And you wonder why i dont trust you. Its like the devils got the dice, but im still in love with him, no matter how hard i try.

 

I cant deny. did you have any regret inside?

Reviews

[Sectando]

very sad to those who've been there, we're far too familiar with these words. how ironic that these words become extremely intimate with us, yet they're about a lack or loss of intimacy.

[ArabellaMortimerHendry]

apart from that, what do you think of the poem ? x

[Sectando]

well i think the expression is good but it's hard to judge in its current format.

[Saddam]

It is very nice.
Make it in poetic style or change your style....