Hear This Heart. Beat.

Just see. Open up your eyes. to me. Look inside and we . collide into the sky. with hopes and dreams repeat.wishing on a streak. stars are on the blink, as we are on the brink. Of finding more of our souls,of flying into lost worlds. making words of gold and burning all the old. Forgetting what is told and sitting in the cold. And watching the lights

a million miles and kisses stolen at night. 

Hear this heart beat. Walking down the street and tapping on the feet. Your mistakes don't matter to me. I just Love you completely. handed you the key. happiness is growing like a tree. The Earth is what we need to travel over seas. And go so far and hold your hand through the demons in the dark. 

The dog is worse than the bark. But don't you care. Because i will be right with you.standing right there. If we go our ways ill never be the same. I wont give up. wont give in. i wont deny this love. I will never die in sin. 

So look into my eyes and see into my soul. We may grow old. But you will still be. the most beautiful angel i have ever seen. 

Reviews

[Jared Michael Smith]

Ah, the fiery passion of unrequited and eternal love... Very nice, indeed! Your words here take me on a journey that show me the ups and downs you have had in this relationship, and even through the hard spots (and time itself), your love still blossoms as it did when it first began. :) My only comments would be on the formatting; I feel this would be better served in shorter stanzas where each little portion with a period was its own line. Then, you wouldn't necessarily need all the comments and your audience would more or less know where the vocalized pauses are. Other than that, I very much enjoyed this poem. Well done, Ms. Hendry! :D

[ArabellaMortimerHendry]

aww thank u hun. have a nice evening xxxx all the best for the future

[Jared Michael Smith]

You're very welcome. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The seemingly sordid fever within the text is tasty to read, well done!