I TRIED

ok so i dont know why but i have a habbit of writing soppy stuff

I tried to stop these feelings taking over, i tried to think like i was still sober. But there in my dreams you will always be, sitting next to me. The world moves around me, but im not in time, my heart skips a beat, when we walk down the line. The heaven and the stars don't know where they are, when you light up the dark.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

A beautiful poem that reflects your soul...I enjoyed the rhyme scheme...and the message of your unheard Love evokes a yearning response, to whom you are expressing it too...really nice.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Making sense to me and I genuinely believe you have to work hard on your skills. This much is not enough to cross the river.

[ArabellaMortimerHendry]

what do you mean?? this much is not enough to cross the river?