you know where u stand

poem i wrote a while back.

my heart is bound my hands are tied im stuck inside 

this mirriored world of mine.rain falls down from my

 eyes love is a joke its no game i spy,walking past 

the soft green grass seeing through a looking glass,

and then i see your gleaming face,so hard for me to

 fall from grace,i hate the way you play ur ace,so 

hard to beat and out of place.look at me im a disgrace,

whats ever happened to the girl with the suitcase,all

 the money from the safe, so crisp and clear its hard to

 state,which road we r gonna take,and although i think its

 strange music still powers my brain,so full of life and faith 

i cant believe my fate which line im i going to fake,i see your

 eyes through the flames,ill never be the same,what type of game

 i play its to tempting for me to stay,and though i may not say i don't

 know what to do anyway,life is a game of rage some say they like to play,

cheating is the rule,so full of foolish things to do.stuck inside this mirriored world,

never knowing who im told, no one knows what wrong or right never holding the final fight,everything in life does

 come at a heavy price,never know with 

the roll of the dice,which side is paradise.

you only have one life,so live it in-till you

 decide to die,the moment has arrived,when its

 time to go and say goodbye to everyone in this

 looking glass eye,flowers falling down from the

 soft white clouds,stars shooting far never wish 

upon a star,never know how really far ,never gamble with ur heart,thats the lesson after dark,when u walk down the park so far, no one

 knows who u r,devil kisses u with the mark.

Reviews

[critic h]

nycly written with a perfect rhyming scheme and a no less flow of words