Paceing dreaming

this is a poem i wrote a couple of years back and i just found it on my laptop so yh lol injoy and tell me what u think :)

within the ashes of our minds,cinder tears run dry, to rearange the wreckage of our lives to hit a heart

 burned one  time to see the sights of our sighs one last high i wont even mind however blue the sky,you can f**k 

off this time i dont need to see your eyes examaning mine,so leave this alone i need to go give me a toke of bitter sweet

no, and remember i said so when its your time to know im not going to keep u in toe,so stop begging  when i said i wont

love u again,mind descend, pretend to mend, all blurry eyed dreams come to an end,nightmares are not from the god send,why 

wont we send messages to freinds saying how we tend the no its better off if not choke on the hope that has soaked 

hearts so fast lightning pass,electrifide harsh,after class what do we learn from the task its like we,re all wearing masks,

stay true to who you are and never let them tell you what you are,falling apart why do you leave a mark make every second

last like theres an avalange about to pass,you just restart. and watch those words fall apart into the wreckage of the 

broken hearts this is our story told so far dont ever regret who u are,maybe this time its gone to far maybe this time

ill reach for the stars.

Within the key of our souls theres a story left untold,within the eyes of the enemy, listen carefully. eyes are black

and spirits sore suffering in the world what on earth for,cinder tears run down to something we found, only hope can save

us now.cant you see its killing me im stronger than youll ever be,watch me walk away from he,enough 

of this hypocracy,Why do you cry?when you know your fucked up inside,been hanged out to dry,demons 

pass by,and tempt you with an apple this is there disguise,cant decide whats right,just adapt and 

survive.take off the mask and show your scars of the past,slowly quickly death is sickly,someone 

knows your name but you dont know if you should go,its the choice thats made the path thats tight,

 the hearts that burn by firelight,this is there plight,so dont put up a fight,dont get blinded by

 the light,hear the words of the hearts as they stab the arch like darts,listen to the souls as time

 takes it's toll,it will all unfold just follow the road into the 

land where everything goes according to plan,where there's no such thing as the equal man.

pack full of cards and dagger's to the heart,russian roulet 

she's never going to forget the things that she bet,this is 

the last chance but its wrecked twisted minds are one of a kind,

lets finish this fight on the frontline,lets poisen ourselves with the truth

anything is over lets carry on sober.Blood pumping all around,iv lost but never 

found,my heads up so high listen to the skies,if you wait for a minute il show you init

,room is spinning so lets keep winning,today is tommow tommow is today so lets get this

 dream back to reality,and listen to the gravity,beat boom sounds

 vibrating all around,a feeling of excstasy this how we make u see whats come over me.

Say your wrong, or say your right but i cant put up a fight its to late i have fell so why

 dont you just drag me to hell? All my life iv tried to find the answer,s but i looked behind

.And now i look in the mirror and see nothing but a glimmer.see you see me theres a past 

inbetween us but you dont see.,you are no longer the one you are just a heartbreaker who 

thinks hes won, ill fake a laugh im so far

 from reality no sense of gravity im lost in time and space i will not fall with grace,

i wonder why i cant seem to find the right amount of time,or what its like to feel so

 high.

,you cant complain about

 the space you got too much stuff on your plate,try and breathe

 through it but surely there's another way,i hate playing this game,

set me on fire and stand well back then laugh as you watch me don't turn

  how can you say i don't mean what i say,and all this time your the one that got away.

 im being killed till i die,so play those cards right,its ur one and only chance to

 win this fight,im weak in the body im sick in the mind.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

I'm weak in the body and sick in the mind " I like that line. Thanks for the friend request.