Memories..

The jaded pages bring in memories..
every moment a revelation..
I wish I could go back in time..
to the fragments of broken perfection..

Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

The fragments of broken perfection are the learning...an they are just so needed. You wrote: "Every moment a revelation"... that is true... and the revelation can be "bad" or "good", one delight us... another teach us....
Your poem is short, but so intense!
*Mary*

[M.Babu]

Nice and Quaint!

Nicely done :D

~M.Babu~

[Arielle Ann]

we often wish to travel in a time machine .... you defined that well in a few words!

[SINDE]

I think this type of metaphorical expression identifies your writing. I love the depth of this amazing piece. It tells a lot about the past and the cruel irreversible hands of time. Great work!

[Lily Mae]

"broken perfection"...very strong words.. I love it..x