Memories..

The jaded pages bring in memories..
every moment a revelation..
I wish I could go back in time..
to the fragments of broken perfection..

Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

The fragments of broken perfection are the learning...an they are just so needed. You wrote: "Every moment a revelation"... that is true... and the revelation can be "bad" or "good", one delight us... another teach us....
Your poem is short, but so intense!
*Mary*

[Coyote Poetry]

Your wish is the wish of the most of us. To go back in time and repair mistakes. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Enigma]

Brilliant poem. Short, subtle and meaningful.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes if only I could go back would I come with perfect perfection, for such a short piece it has many meaning of wisdom.
Excellent write.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great expressions of beautiful memories! Excellent poem!

[KAREN]

Memories are just that way, making you want to go back in time! Beautiful words and thoughts!

[Rose]

We all have moments of sacred revelation- the key to great writing is keeping all of those fragmented, imperfect ideas and pieces around in order to trigger more great revelations. Fabulous piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

Some may feel this way. I did at one point but I think sometimes you have to let go of the past and understand and accept imperfections. Imperfections make us real make each moment and person unique.

[Jazique]

Thats a nice flow, well done, bravo to the sweet and simple of of your writings,As it relates to people such as a person next to me. But awsome on Memories really touched my heart and mind. Excellente keep up the the awesome work.