This is vivid and full of energy. This, for me, is a poem about strength, about facing adversity, and throwing our fears and despair into the winds and carrying on... it tells us how, lost in "singularity and anonymity", unheard and unseen by others, raked by the winds and the vagaries of nature, we may truly find our inner strength... where there is nothing else for it come from but from within, that "flame of endless quest burning bright". Evocative and inspiring poem, really well written, thank you! :)
How your words ride the waves of thought! There is such an enchanted phrasing that breathes insight into the hungering heart and mind... Loved it all, but those last lines seemed so fiercely courageous to me... fighting on through it all.
:"the song of life,
music mundane,lyrics ethereal.."...and yet "a persisting devotion to an endless path..
a brave endeavor on its part !"...this is what life is all about!inspiring read!
Seems that whatever one feels, however one feels, there has to be hope and the strength that things will get better. Your words are compelling and powerful, sad in some way yet the ending most definitely opens a door ..
This is vivid and full of energy. This, for me, is a poem about strength, about facing adversity, and throwing our fears and despair into the winds and carrying on... it tells us how, lost in "singularity and anonymity", unheard and unseen by others, raked by the winds and the vagaries of nature, we may truly find our inner strength... where there is nothing else for it come from but from within, that "flame of endless quest burning bright". Evocative and inspiring poem, really well written, thank you! :)
i am 23..a thinker and a dreamer..life is hard..and i'm just fumbling my way through it..writing is my constant companion and escape..
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