Turmoil

           turmoil

     shattered dreams

  love,hatred,confusion

fighting,losing,lost cause

            jinxed

Author's Note

trying my hand at writing a cinquain..inspired by the group-'I Challenge You' :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You did a outstanding job on this cinquain. A complete poem in so few words. That takes great talent. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

all the elements of Turmoil are expressed...nice work...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fantastic, elegant and a perfect cinquain

[Murtuza]

I think it's a really good first effort! And the subject is a very interesting one as well! Great job :)

[Lily Mae]

I can feel the power behind your write.. You've penned these emotions very well :)x