Turmoil

           turmoil

     shattered dreams

  love,hatred,confusion

fighting,losing,lost cause

            jinxed

Author's Note

trying my hand at writing a cinquain..inspired by the group-'I Challenge You' :)

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

You can really feel your anger within the poem and I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this poem.

[Rossen]

You most certainly have done well, nice work

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent!

[LA Lorena]

I think you did a nice job of this. I guess I am going to have to try and meet one of these challenges one day soon. I'm slacking!

[Searching 4 Serenity]

So much meaning with such little wording

[Robin]

ah the feeling of wrestling life , life always wins

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I liked this you did a good job

I have written a few poems in this style a few years ago and have not posted them yet lol I think I might now

[Poetic Beauty]

This sums up turmoil quite well. I think you did a great job writing this one.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Very well done my friend.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

nice!