You and Me

sometimes ties between two people are so strong that distance and space cease to matter..and even when they are not around,they are with you every moment..

We share dreams,notions and visions..

An eternity of candid emotions..

Its an unseen bond that holds us together..

Its austere beauty making us believe in now and forever..

And even if I'm not there in your life..

I will be with you every moment and manifest as your conscience..

Our bond would thrive and grow in the distant world we created together..

Building on..

Stronger than ever..

 7th 

Mar 19, 2011

• Short Stuff
• You and Me

Author's Note

this is not the kind of stuff i normally write..so please be honest with your reviews..happy reading!

Reviews

[Keoni]

just who? is this he and she? have you heard of a band called she and he? you might want to look into it.....im a musician and lyrics are really a dime a dozen, but well drafted poetry is hard to come by......could you be a little more specific about this, names and places can so easily be revieled yet also kept secret.....hearing me? k

[Nothing Personal]

Good rhyme y poems..has a very distinct flavor of romanticism and togetherness..I would say it's a card poem..for the special one..Well done..

[Erinne S.]

This was a great piece!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Nice and solid. A very romantic poem, laced with affirmation of love and trust.
I like this one very much.

[sid......]

nice writing!

[northern monkey]

Love this - eloquent expression that instinctively we are all most alive and fulfilled when we connect. Good work.

[abhas]

i have seen it with my eyes.. a bond so strong... that defies all possible logic... it is true... i agree.. and it is beautiful indeed...

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

great!and i can so relate...good work!

[Deviant Works]

Gosh... I am a complete believer in unstoppable, unyielding connections between two people. I believe that once the bond is made, allowed to manifest into honest timeless love, then there is nothing on this earth that could keep those hearts apart. There is no distance love is not willing to journey, sailing across seas to be together, or simply walking a step in front of you and into waiting arms. You proved this belief all the more with your beautiful poem, Arabha. This brought tears to my eyes, so very passionate and completely sure of where you want to be. "Stronger than ever..."

[iamkim]

This is wonderful friend! It's like all-in-one :) Thanks for sharing this! I love how you put your words into writings. You play with your words perfectly! Good job!

[M.Babu]

whether it's not the kind of stuff you write you've still managed to give it that talented flair that you possess. You clearly have your way with words and it was just amazing how you strung each word so cleverly to the next one. Robust emotion in the words, easily relatable, great structure!...this is simply magnificent work here.
The whole poem is perfect but i have to say what i loved the most...
Its an unseen bond that holds us together..
Its austere beauty making us believe in now and forever..
GREAT JOB HERE