The Spectator..

I am greatness..

and I am glory..

I am there in every victory..

I'm also in every wreath that grieves..

I'm in every breath that lives..

I run in the holy stream..

I am the morning balm..

I am the spring's calm..

I see..

I feel..

I'm there..

I'm a silent spectator..

Author's Note

i wrote this one long back and it may not be like the other ones..but pls leave honest reviews.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I got the feeling that this poem was speaking of war. If so, I thought the way you personified it was very effecive. I especially liked the rhythem and rhyme of lines seven and eight.

This is a very insightful glimpse into human behavior, and I tink you have rendered it in the correct light.

[Murtuza]

I like the mysterious tone. You've applied some good philosophy here. Well written

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A short and powerful poem with some thought provoking wording and beautiful imagery. It would be even more poetic and powerful if you took out the overuse of 'I' that apart you write very beautifully and your poems make the reader think.

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Short but powerfull, I like how these verses flow, it goes far too quickly and makes me wish it was longer. Yet, perhaps making it longer would've ruined the greatness of brevity in which this was made. Great writing.

[M.Babu]

Doesn't matter when you wrote this, it's still contains good lines. This poem gripped me from the start to the last stanza. Noone should negate its awesomeness (hope this's a word:))

[dukovan]

It makes you feel as if there is some kind of omnipitant perspective, or is that simply every perspective at once experiencing itself?

[Nothing Personal]

It's about omnipresence. Like a superior force or more reasonably, a person on top off his/her time..An epitome of feel good. Beautiful write.

[Ladysue]

I love this whole idea...and the last line is great as is the title for this piece...very spirited...beautiful piece...

[kyrie]

To be silent, and say nothing, and be present, is at times the most powerful thing of all. This poen captures that beautifully. Very well done.

[Akshat♥]

sometimes in life being a silent spectator is not that easy...
seeing things go...
you see ,feel it..but can't touch it..
nice poem...long way to go:)