Absolutely love the power and the tenderness of this write Arabdha. The imagery was colorful and crystal clear. Change is not always easy, in fact may times it is excruciatingly difficult...but so very often, change is necessary for the completeness of our souls and our being. I must admit I read this a few times for no other reason then it felt and sounded good flowing from my mouth. I love when poetry makes me feel that way. Very heartfelt and honest. Beautifully written.
thanks for sharing Arabdha
allen
That's a poem with a wonderful sense of imagery. I could 'walk on' along with your words, silently. I love a free-thinker and that's what you prove to be with this poem, a toast to silence is restricted to few. Beautiful indeed.
This is a beautiful poem. I find it a content piece, a thoughtful piece, and a safe piece. The voice is clearly wise in admitting that they cannot tell they're own destiny, but they are content with that. Very well written. :)
strong words are engraved here..
color suits the poem well..
As i walk on..sounds are fading away but the senses are
never ending..
As i walk on in this unusual path of life..
my little steps are vibrating..but i still managed to contol it..
nice poem:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
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One of your best poems among what I have read so far , just loved this one , great writing . I have something to say about the title , that is , it sounds a bit odd , I am sure it is a typo and that the title should be :: AS I WALK ON :: instead of ::A I WALK ON:: .
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