Absolutely love the power and the tenderness of this write Arabdha. The imagery was colorful and crystal clear. Change is not always easy, in fact may times it is excruciatingly difficult...but so very often, change is necessary for the completeness of our souls and our being. I must admit I read this a few times for no other reason then it felt and sounded good flowing from my mouth. I love when poetry makes me feel that way. Very heartfelt and honest. Beautifully written.
thanks for sharing Arabdha
allen
A very peaceful poem filled with longing, for both the past and the future...I can see those swirling colors that meet at the present as we walk on. Your words are like a beautiful painting.
I felt like I was drifting off to sleep after a gloomy day, the sounds and memories slowly fading with conciseness, then at the end it was almost like waking up from a bad dream, it left me wondering if I would find the sun shining.
I could imagine this short but also ETERNAL journey that continues even after death, I could hear the silence you wanted the reader to hear, the colors fading and falling in raindrops as I walked in the street of my mind. Beautiful poem, thought provoking and tells alot about the author as a person.
There is a mystical feel to your poem, with the reflecting of thoughts on life and the world incorporating the Universal aspect of it all...I like this...
Nice. the way you ended each verse ... is like you are walking on to next thing. It creative with somewhat of a deeper meaning hidden. So nice as wekeep moving no matterwhat happens and if we have to stop and think. Let's.............
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