Musings from another morn...

As the monsoon showers..
word their saga
in the dew and mist of the flawless dawn..

as the gypsies seek their recluse...
in the wakeful taverns of another morn...

as the vibgyor of rainbows hues
reflects in the sun's wrath...

the colorful tapestry-humble and nostalgic..
an ode to a era bygone..

as the soul waltzes
to the hymn of the sanguine breeze..

every awaited moment
painting in a masterpiece..

Dubious I am...!

Will the rainbow hues lend color to the
dull monotone of another existence ?

will the morning glory mourn when we are gone ?

will the gypsies seek those who were yesterday ?

will the breeze embrace another pilgrim on life's errant path ?

or will it be as it always was-

a quiver of questions unanswered...?

Reviews

[DreyaArt]

Oh beautiful writing! Well done! Well done! *applause*! Excellent piece! Such imagery! Fantastic! Thank you for the invitation to review! What a great opportunity! Such words, fantastic choices! Just wow. Perfection! Keep writing, learning and improving! Great piece thank you!

[luna11]

Amazing! I love the structure of it, and the way you write is beautiful and intriguing :)

[Arabdha]

Thank you luna...that was so encouraging !

[Poe Redd]

A colorful, stunning piece- clever and calm in feeling. Hm. yeah I really like it!

[Arabdha]

Thank you so much Poe Redd :-)

[Gaurav Walia]

Its a beautiful piece Arabdha...Great work :D

[Arabdha]

Thank you Gaurav :-)

[Gaurav Walia]

You're welcome.. :D

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice structure, a set scene then the questions in the second part, with lots of fine images..

[Arabdha]

thanks you so much for taking the time to read this...

[quinfinn]

this is superb poetry. talent such as yours will not go unnoticed....well done!

[Arabdha]

Than you quinfinn...your reviews always make my day !

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. You create good visions and thoughts with your words. Rain make us desire the sun and ponder life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Arabdha]

Thank you so much coyote ! Hope you're having a good day ...