7 adults I believe AdamLanza is a victim of mind control as well as mark Laughner and James Holmes.That man child was a patsy and we have all fallen into a false flag operation . Even if I am wrong about the hypnosis and mind control,I know Nancy Lanza worked for DARPA and they make video games for military training.Oh and the poem is beautiful but I think god is wondering how long it is going to take us to call bullshit.
I love the last stanza! And this whole poem in general. It's beautiful, and I wonder where the love is as well. I mean, killing 20 innocent children.. They'll never get to grow up and have lives of their own, never get to work to accomplish something.. They had all of those opportunities taken away from them.. The Newtown, Connecticut school shooting was definitely tragic, and I think this is a beautiful tribute to those 26 people.
People these days are just increasing the couragement to do more extreme violence and nothing but deaths, I agree "Where is the love?". Some humans are just thinking sick and been on drugs, and I'm pretty sure what thier stupidity will bring them to, nothing but death and the devil .... "What the hell happened to life/humans" is what I might say to the violence people are doing.
Such a great work you did, my friend :)
Thank you for sharing.
sometimes I too wonder where is the love? It is all around us but when these terrible things happen we have t6o ask, where is the love. Brilliant write.
Very nice, and simple in a good way. I enjoyed this. And I feel like you didn't mean to portray it this way, but it makes me question the man in the sky looking down on these children being massacred. And all he can say it "Where is the love!?" I mean, if that's the god of men then I truly fear for humanities future.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ah, but God will not stop things from happening to people, he will only destroy those who hurt other.. read moreAh, but God will not stop things from happening to people, he will only destroy those who hurt others, and comfort those who have been hurt. My father has hurt me all my life. Now what do you know, he's suddenly in prison for the next 8 years. And notice that people only turn to God when bad things happen?
I don't believe in a god, so I like the message I've seen in your work. I think religion is just ano.. read moreI don't believe in a god, so I like the message I've seen in your work. I think religion is just another tool used to keep people in line.
11 Years Ago
Regardless of if God is real or not, you are very right. Religion is used for such destructive purpo.. read moreRegardless of if God is real or not, you are very right. Religion is used for such destructive purposes.
11 Years Ago
Well thank-you. Lol
But anyway, this was a great write. Thankx for the R.R :)
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